Comments : Please don't

  • 6 years ago

    by Avarna

    I F'CKING LOVE IT.

    Y'all future king.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Oh my goodness.. The build up of this, the suspense.. So many questions going around my mind right now. Nominated

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this. The build up and final twist were excellent. A well deserved nomination. Well done. Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    The undertone of abuse and the child begging 'please don't' to his father is heartbreaking. Really well written with the suspense and the twist :-) x
    =^.^=