Comments : The Last Sunset I will ever See (Rd)

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This touched me in a way you will never know. Add to my favorite. All the best to you

  • 2 years ago

    by Milo

    I'm sorry I edited the last four stanzas. The version you saw was not enough. At first I didn't want to reveal what I saw at the end because its too personal, but I guess writing has a funny way of revealing what I want.

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sub judge comment:

    Reading this stirred something within me it’s a moving
    write of a silent voice that is slowly starting to fade, slowly
    starting to loose the sense of reality…each verse was so
    descriptive its like sitting and hearing the writer say all this
    and that voice is so loud and clear and at the same time
    weighed with a sadness…a touching write.