Comments : The Pitfalls Of Joy:

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I really enjoyed this very much. The rhyming and flow were excellent and I loved the concept of happiness being a possession that you can polish up when you need it. Best wishes Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Scott this is great! A really unique take on the subject. The idea of owning our 'happy' is actually very thought provoking for me and a good reminder that it's mine and I need to protect it from being stolen! Adding to my faves :-) x

  • 6 years ago

    by Amrita Singh

    Brilliantly composed :)