Wow! Miss Ren,

Say it how it is and let them know it! A passionate and raw piece, with such a flow of sadness.

Much love and warmth lady
Michael :)x

Awww, dear Cowgirl. I really can't press the like button for this one. I am so sad for whatever happened. Now it's my turn to say hang in there, this is temporary and things will get clearer and better for you or for that person you are refering to. And even if things like that happen...there are always reasons and purposes. Just let it all out. Things will be better, and always remember I am here.

Ren,
This is seething with anger, frustration and even a little remorse thrown in, perhaps.
It's never easy when someone we know we have helped so much treats us so flippantly. I am sorry to hear - if literal - you've gone through this.

All the best

I wish this had been nominated and if it was had received some recognition atleast because this really pulls me in and would be something I would say to certain people or a certain person anyway a fabulous piece filled with emotion.
Take care x

This poem, like many of yours I have read, is very good. I actually wanted to say something more profound, but the word I am looking for I currently can not find.

Hell hath no fury...

Ren, I know this is 5 months or so in the past, but poetry immortalises memories and events, doesn't it?
I liked, not only the powerful wording that conveyed the hurt, but the layout of piece. This, for me, added to the raw, yet controlled, on the very edge of an explosion...

I take it from your latest poem, all is on the mend. I do hope so.

Take care,
Michael x

I just saw this Ren.. hell hath no fury right.. i also feel like saying to quite a few people. :)