by SERA Feb 14, 2018
category :
Friendship, family /
other
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This is great Sera! I can picture the scene perfectly as it's written. But the underlying 'swing' I feel is written more about a 'see-saw ' relationship? Either way, it's a fab write! :-) x |
by SERA
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Thanks for the feedback!! |
by Ocean Chant
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Sad to the heart, but prettily written |
by SERA
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Thank you |