Comments : For Real

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Putting on a brave face for people is one of the hardest things to do. Laughing outwardly when we are crying inside is a dreadful thing.
    Anyway, this is a very well expressed piece with some fluent rhyming.

    All the best and a warm welcome to the site,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Khai Montegrande

      Thanks Ben! and I appreciate that you like the rhyming.