Comments : Ghosting

  • 1 year ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I was snooping whilst I should be have been sleeping and came across this omg if it's about who/what I think it's about then no no no no no no no no no do not let him or any man/woman get to you like that remember you are worth so much more beautiful lady really you are and I mean that from the bottom of my heart. I wish I could nominate this resonates so much unfortunately
    Much love xx

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      No worries, Sweet Em, this wasn't about any particular person, but more about several relationships from all different levels that have unfortunately ended up like this. But I appreciate you so much, and thank you so so very much for all of your kind, encouraging words!! :) You're awesome! Much love to you, hon <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "I wanted to love you
    louder than your demons
    ... ever could ..."
    ^^
    Totally brilliant opening and a fantastic quote in its own right that speaks so much in so few words.
    We've all wanted to 'fix' a man ... to love him all better, sadly it rarely works - as with everyone, you can't love someone that doesn't love themself. I love it Ren! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Very true and wise words!! Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment :) I really appreciate it! Take care <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What a superb opening stanza... "I wanted to love you louder than your demons
    …ever could…" There are givers and takers in the World and it seems that sometimes the people who need the most help cast it aside. A great little write. Best wishes Milly x

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      It really does seem like that, doesn't it? Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! Take care <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, Wow what a write! You hooked me right from the start and sent me on this journey that ended too soon-this really is awesome Ren, I'm blown away-Hugs to you girl!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much, Brenda!! I really appreciate you and am glad you enjoyed it. So many hugs to you!! <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Miss Ren,

    this gives me the chills brrr! BBut what a piece lady, so powerful in such a short few lines. So cleverly penned. albeit a thread of sadness.
    Much love and warmth
    Michael :)x

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Sweet Michael! I always appreciate you and your comments! Much love and warmth right back 'atcha! <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    Ren you have your own unique style of writing. You always portray so much with fewer words. Though after such a start I didn't want it to end...
    still loved the end of this poem.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! Take care <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    "..Of good and pearly looking things
    We tend to love and appreciate
    Little know we of their misery
    Which track and crack the hero's skull.."

    Reminiscing on these my lines, reminds I can relate to this. Not all we admire, fit in. Silence whispers that we may think.
    Always intrigued by your great wit!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Hey you! Good to see you back on PnQ :) thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I hope you are doing well :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Nee

    This is such unique style of poetry. It flows really well, although I felt somehow that you were about to lose the strength of the rhyme at the end. Nonetheless, it still was a lovely read!

    Write on!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thanks so much! :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Kelz45

    Absolutely perfect

    I love your way of writing

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much!! I really appreciate it! And glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Megan Chapman

    I love this Ren. Such sparing expression of such poignancy.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!!

  • 1 year ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    This is a beautiful peice. Very well worded & flowed together perfectly. I can truly feel this.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! <3

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Nicely laid out, Ren. I do like your style!
    As for the content. Well, some people don't appreciate what they have, do they?

    Take care.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thanks so much! I really appreciate it :) take care!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    Every line is speaking great things. The way you have lined up this write is really appreciable. The last line is giving a fine touch to this art:
    …you were just passing through…

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!!