Comments : -nevermore-

  • 6 years ago

    by Nema

    It sounds like a song to me :)
    The repetitions are flowing so well.

    "Soul,
    gone in the world,
    Running, running with wolves....
    gone, warmth from the cold,
    my cold war,
    gone by what was said before...."
    ^
    That's a very good stanza to start the piece with. And although the rest of the poem wasn't as strong as the opening, it still made me want to read more of it.
    Something in your piece feels so very relatable to me.

    "where are you from?
    'cause in the end, I'm there too,"

    Oh, man, that was good!

    I really enjoyed this. Keep writing!