Comments : [metaphorically speaking]

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    I love the irony of coming across this poem after the last one I wrote... which was literally [not metaphorically] written out if spite.

    Hands down the most creative title I have seen. Your metaphors and smilies made me smile and relate. I have ink poisoning too. Great rhyming throughout.

    -Tony

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Love the line "a bonifide wordicide, personified in script"
    in fact, I love the whole piece, from the deliberate neglect of capitals, to the single block of text. All this with a theme flowing from start o finish.

    Well done.

    • 6 years ago

      by donk2ymouth

      im on the toilet rn grinning like a hooligan. thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I am speechless.