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by Phoenix ¥
I love the simplicity of this beautiful and evocative poem which mixes landscape and emotion so well
Awe...you took me into your special moment and let me share it with you but...what happened afterwards you keep to yourself as you should. Very simple..not sugar coated or " pink ribbony" just, well lovely really...
This really is quite lovely. It gave us a sneak peek into a budding romance. Well done-
lovely little piece and clever
by Poet on the Piano
Beautifully intimate and I love how the brevity here captures that moment, yet doesn't give so much to the reader. I like the emphasis of "...stay", that small simple plea. That desire.