I love the simplicity of this beautiful and evocative poem which mixes landscape and emotion so well
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Awe...you took me into your special moment and let me share it with you but...what happened afterwards you keep to yourself as you should. Very simple..not sugar coated or " pink ribbony" just, well lovely really...

This really is quite lovely. It gave us a sneak peek into a budding romance. Well done-

lovely little piece and clever

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Beautifully intimate and I love how the brevity here captures that moment, yet doesn't give so much to the reader. I like the emphasis of "...stay", that small simple plea. That desire.