Comments : She is... Cheetah (Palindrome)

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Fantastic palindrome Michael! Such beautiful descriptions of a beautiful creature (a cat of course!, lol) :-) x
    =^.^=
    *spelling 'cheetah'

    • 1 year ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty :)x
      and well spotted *pardon the pun*

  • 1 year ago

    by naaz

    Yes sir, I know. I can see it. Full points goes to you for that. Through the structure you put emphasis on that one and single quality of cheetah for which it is known as the fastest animal in the world, It's speed. It looks like a cheetah is on a hunt and while hunting when it took a jump you captured it in your eyes as this structure.

    I was surprised why no one was nominating this poem. I mean a poem like this should get the nomination only for its structure, the content part comes later. I am going to come on that too.

    Well, the content is written in a way to support the structure. Telling the reader about all those qualities of the cheetah which makes it undetectable to its prey. I love big cats like tiger, lion, and I am not even afraid of them. But still when it comes to choose among them, my most favorite is always cheetah.

    Though very few of them left and only in Africa yet they are one of nature's best gift to us. And we know what we do with gifts given to us by nature. Same thing happening to them too. See how long they survive.

    Theme is obviously, cheetah. Language is feline. No sir, language is just beautiful. The way you described every tiny detail of its beauty; From its body language to its eyes or regarding its mental and physical strength. I am so happy to read it and more happy that it isn't camouflaged anymore.

    At last one request sir, please keep on surprising me and the rest of the pnq members with your poetic diction and such good structures.

    All the best!

    • 1 year ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Naaz for your lovely message and you certainly read this well :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Now this is a Palindrome!! Well done and so vividly
    penned without missing a beat! Good job :)

    • 1 year ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Meena, for your lovely words :)x

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    A superb Palindrome, Michael. The imagery of the Cheetah, her power, and feline grace 'paws' of the page.

    Great job with a tricky form.

    • 1 year ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D 'paws' for thought ;)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Excellent Michael x

    • 1 year ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em :)x

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, well done on this! You have done this Palindrome beautifully and your descriptives are on point.

    • 1 year ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda, words are always lovely from you :)x

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Judging comment:
    I have really enjoyed reading everyone’s formed poems and particularly palindromes. I loved Michael’s description of a cheetah – celebrating its unique beauty and highlighting those wonderful features. The fact that it reads just as well backwards is owed to clever and careful placement of each and every word. Beautiful! :-) x
    =^.^=