....evening rains have a way to make all things perfect
and love-able especially when shared with the one you love.
So detailed and vivid just to find out its all a dream but a
beautiful and smiley one...lovely read :)

Congrats on the HM! :)

Great flow and well rhymed. Change "enter laced" to "interlaced" in line 6

Just stopped by to read it again and to
see if you have posted anything new...