This is a reposted poem
- xxK

A sad piece, Kate. When love goes wrong, it's truly awful, isn't it?

Take care,

Ben

This is so very sad but so delicately done... We will no doubt all be able to relate to this and after a break up it's natural to feel like you don't belong anywhere but believe me (and it comes from experience) when you're least expecting it you'll find 'the one' or atleast someone who knows your worth and believe me they'll see perfection even in those imperfections that you have and I say this is the nicest possible way because I know we all have imperfections and I know they make us perfect in our own ways anyway enough of my ramblings...
Take care

Kate,
A piece with sadness all the way through. I hope some colour comes back to you

Michael :)

Very well penned!

Judging Comment - Faster by Kate points 4 - This resonated a lot with me and I found myself singing along though saddening there was an upbeat tune about it.

I really can relate with everything here! =) I love all of your poems but this one is one of my favourites! Great piece! I liked how you wrote about being forgotten. I know how hard that feels! I hope you're okay.