love this poem and the imagery in it :) great write

I wish I had a nomination left as this is one of those dark twisty little poems that I love.

It could be considered macabre by some but and in a certain frame of mind I would also.

In my present state I think it's simply says "this is how it is".

Poetry is a funny thing! Whatever you read, you will be affected by and interprete in your own way.

We do not have access to the thoughts of others, yet we hope we have a little understanding.

I enjoyed reading this massively.

Regards

Craig

I like this a lot. Nicely paced, nice format with sprinkling of rhyme.

Take care.

A dark early post from you and one I thoroughly enjoyed.
A warm welcome to the site and all the very best,

Ben

Great beginning, I've nominated it for the weekly contest. Nice write!