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  • 2 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Welcome Kay, this first poem from you is good. I like the darkness and the way you have rhymed throughout.

    We don't stop needing our parents when we grow up, do we? In fact, when our minds are troubled, that's when we need understanding and comfort.

    Monsters don't dwell beneath the bed, they rampage free within a head.

    I enjoyed reading your poem.

    Take care.

  • 2 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Welcome to the crazy farm lol...
    I like this first piece by you which states we never stop needing our parents/carers for as long as we live some will be there night/day others not so much but we also need to learn to stand on our own 2 feet and fight there demons inside our heads face to face no matter how hard it is and no matter how long it takes, some of us can, some of us can't unfortunately.
    Take care

  • 2 years ago

    by mistake

    I like The thought process that this rhyme brings and it really does have a solid grounding in many existing relationships. Please keep writing.