Comments : spring time

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I love the way you have formatted this. As for the content, life does go too fast so I suppose the trick is to enjoy it while we can!

    All the best

  • 5 years ago

    by Alice

    I like the juxtaposition in connotations associated with 'bitter' and 'warm'

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I too wanted to comment on the "bitter warm" part, as I think that was clever and intentional, almost a sense of loss and wonder in knowing how quickly seasons seem to change.

    Beautiful piece, short but budding with hope and promise!