Comments : Cocoon

  • 5 years ago

    by CânnâBîsh

    I love this.. Wanted to keep reading

    • 3 years ago

      by mistake

      Thank you. This piece in particular has brought me back here a bit more permanently I think.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Cleverly done. :0)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Lovely :). Nominated

    • 3 years ago

      by mistake

      Thank you, honored =)

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is very y clever piece as the others have stated

    • 3 years ago

      by mistake

      Thanks for the comment, I also found and enjoyed some of your poems too;P