Comments : But June Came And Citylights Broke My Heart

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Glad to see it was nominated

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Astounding piece mkkk

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben

    as i was reading this i was thinking to myself how annoyed i am i don't have my nominations back yet so i was pleased to see it has been nominated! - this needs to be on the front page for about a year, love it :)

    added to favs so i can eat it later!1

    Ben :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    A lovely piece of writing, with a mixture of reminiscing and where things are today.
    nicely penned indeed with lots of painted imagery.

    Michael :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    The format and imagery work well in creating an atmosphere that hangs like a heavy head.
    Q. Another dandelion reference? What is the significance with this weed? Is it because of its beauty in natural surroundings? Is it the way it's seeds fly when whispered wishes are made?