Comments : Her Many Seasons

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sonnet 18, the sequel! Well done on this, Mark.

  • 2 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This sounds good to me, Mark.

  • 2 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw ... fantastic sonnet Mark with wonderful metaphors for love. Beautiful! :-) x

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Very lovely piece as usual Mark, and the rhyming scheme I like :)
    Well done

  • 2 years ago

    by Bless_Poet

    wow, it is very relatable, i like its descriptive and i love that.

  • 2 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Excellently done! Added to favorites!

    --- MKKK

  • 2 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    damn this is beautiful!

    Mark I have no mile long comment to give...its just flipping beautiful

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, just so wonderfully put, Mark. Lovely!

  • 2 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    Love and the many seasons that accompany it — happiness the kind spring brings, melancholy that comes in with the rain and the grief and sadness one might see in winters; and you have well blended these feelings with the seasons of your lover - a lady and her many seasons. This is an excellent portrayal of the myriad moods and feelings, and the wait for summer's joys. But isn't love a mixture of everything, then why keep awaiting her summer mood? Why not accept everything? [Do correct me if I have interpreted it wrong. :) ] All in all, a beautiful poem.