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by Phoenix ¥
I enjoyed the vivid imagery you used in this poem which so well describes the extremes of love and the pain of still loving somebtyou don’t want to.
Great write x
by Someone Invisible
Thank you, I wasnt sure if it made much sense. I'm glad to know you were able to imagine what I was trying to say.
"and they've migrated north to eat at the fabric of my fragile heart..."
Absolutely love that line!! Well done on a great write!
Thank you, I quite like that line too.