Comments : Homecoming

  • 2 years ago

    by Megan Chapman

    This is such a lovely poem Tanya. Love it!

    • 2 years ago

      by Tanya Southey

      Thank you! I better get off this site! I have work to do today :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Tanya, I liked this a lot. It's very melancholy and the longing for what used to be . Well done and welcome to P&Q.

    • 2 years ago

      by Tanya Southey

      Thank you so much - for both the welcome and the feedback.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The spoon has
    leached its metal
    into my tea

    ^^

    Love this and the write as a whole. A very warm welcome to the site.

    Ben

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Hi Tanya welcome to the site. A lovely piece with some great metaphors. Milly x

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A very beautiful write and one I felt so deeply that I am adding it to my favorites. A warm welcome to the site!

    • 2 years ago

      by Tanya Southey

      Thank you so much! That is a warm wlecome indeed :)

  • 2 years ago

    by VAHID

    there is a delicate connection between the lines...i like it.

    • 2 years ago

      by Tanya Southey

      Thank you, it's great getting feedback from other writers