Comments : Our Story

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I love this, Hellon, and am glad to see it nominated.

    Take care,


  • 2 years ago

    by Matthew McKewon

    A touching bitter sweet delight, thank you

  • 2 years ago

    by Maple Tree


    Your poetry and this poem for one is touching and elegant. I love your crafty way of blending words with your emotions and moments in time. Beautiful!

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely emotional piece. Milly x

  • 2 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh wow!! All I can say is I'm glad to see this nominated as I'm lost for words

  • 2 years ago

    by Noureddine

    Nice poem carry on

  • 1 year ago

    by Daniel

    Elegant, lovely poem! I think trees are quite symbolic, and you paint a rebatable and sad story here. The metaphor of things around us ending is always a poignant one