Comments : Broken Vases

  • 4 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh wow... Just no words

  • 4 years ago

    by Ren

    Absolutely beautiful

  • 4 years ago

    by Mark

    Great win!

  • 4 years ago

    by naaz

    I can't help falling in love with this one.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ren

    This beautiful piece gave me chills the first time I read it and it still does. Congrats on the win!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    The imagery of two broken vases lying there yet still intact with
    feelings for each other and it will remain as such even after. This can also
    be related to two people who deeply care for each other and are there for
    each other through it all. Perhaps my interpretation may be wrong but that
    is the picture I get in this...nicely penned.

  • 4 years ago

    by Darren

    Judges comment

    This Got me at 'fractured fragility' There is strong emotion in this piece that lights up the screen. Great depth of character and storytelling in this piece. No filler words, the poem is stripped bare down to its essentials. Good job (7 points)