Comments : Pause (Rondeau)

  • 5 years ago

    by Megan Chapman

    Exquisite! :) x

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Nominated

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks lovely lady, I really appreciate that :-) x
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  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I was going to comment with this inspired critique, but somehow...

    "you make me forget"

    Darn! Very good Kitty x

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty,

    What a lovely rondeau, clever lady. I had to 'paws' for thought on this ;)
    Well done indeed
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Tee hee :-) thanks so much lovely :-) x
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  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved it. Great rhyming with sensuous undertone this could be a lover, cat or a gentle breeze. It is beautifully written and open to much interpretation. A very clever piece well worth the nomination. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      It's so lovely to see you here Milly and thanks for your lovely comments :-) x
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  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Such a bliss to read this poem. Perfect

  • 5 years ago

    by naaz

    I loved how you wrote or placed, you make me forget, in the last stanza.

    It's like you did it intentionally. Mostly, it comes after the other line. Like, he really made you forget.

    See, these little things, details differentiate the best among the rest.

    Very creative, KCL!

    I think, this week judges should go for senyru, rondeau, haiku and your poem should be on the front page with Ben and Tony's senyru.

    All the best!

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Naaz, such lovely comments - thank you so much :-) x
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  • 5 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    Oh wonderful, this was quite a refreshing piece to read — full of hope, joy and a beautiful, bright future — all mixed into a single piece of a difficult form, the rondeau. You have very beautifully penned this write and this is absolutely breathtaking. Hope to read many more cheerful pieces from you. Congratulations.

    • 5 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so very much for your judging comments and your points Gumshuda, I really appreciate it :-) x
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