Exquisite! :) x

Nominated

I was going to comment with this inspired critique, but somehow...

"you make me forget"

Darn! Very good Kitty x

Miss Kitty,

What a lovely rondeau, clever lady. I had to 'paws' for thought on this ;)
Well done indeed
Much love
Michael :)x

Loved it. Great rhyming with sensuous undertone this could be a lover, cat or a gentle breeze. It is beautifully written and open to much interpretation. A very clever piece well worth the nomination. Milly x

Such a bliss to read this poem. Perfect

I loved how you wrote or placed, you make me forget, in the last stanza.

It's like you did it intentionally. Mostly, it comes after the other line. Like, he really made you forget.

See, these little things, details differentiate the best among the rest.

Very creative, KCL!

I think, this week judges should go for senyru, rondeau, haiku and your poem should be on the front page with Ben and Tony's senyru.

All the best!

Judging comment:

Oh wonderful, this was quite a refreshing piece to read — full of hope, joy and a beautiful, bright future — all mixed into a single piece of a difficult form, the rondeau. You have very beautifully penned this write and this is absolutely breathtaking. Hope to read many more cheerful pieces from you. Congratulations.