Comments : You Give Me Butterflies

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A dramatic, dark picture of violence. Creatively written raises vivid imagery. Definitely worthy of its nomination. Best wishes Milly x

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Congrats!

  • 7 years ago

    by RustySoul

    Congratulations Mark!

  • 7 years ago

    by Darren

    judges comment

    Just that power in the last line. IF a break had been placed after 'cries' this would have been a 10. I just think the punch would be missed without. Such a colorful write, dressing up such disturbing undertones with delightful imagery is very clever. Great job PH (7 points)

    • 7 years ago

      by Paul Hirst

      I thank you all in over whelmed with the generosity of my fellow scribes
      Thank You