Comments : Dancing In A Noose

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I feel there is some darkness coupled with a deep sense
    of sadness...its like the one you trusted and believed in and
    ready to do all suddenly revealed his/her true form...which is
    a bigger wound to deal with...

    Good to see you have posted a poem after a long time!
    Hope there will be more to come...keep penning!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    judging comment-

    I love this poem, with its unique
    twist of "Pray and Prey" at the end.

    To love someone and to be betrayed its devastating
    to the heart! and to the soul... brilliant poem this week by End of Eternity!!