Comments : when Blackbird sings (rondeau)

  • 5 years ago

    by charlie

    A very nice write, here.
    The subject of 'blackbird' fits beautifully, also.

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    A lovely piece Mr D,

    a piece that shines dark and light, all wrapped up in a wonderful rondeau :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Glad to see it was nominated. All the very best

  • 5 years ago

    by Ren


  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    You do these so well Mr D, fantastic as ever

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, I would genuinely love to see this on the front page next Monday; it is probably the best Rondeau I have read on this site, alongside Hellon's.

    All the best and a very well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Mr. Darcy Rondeau is a beautiful form and you made it even more by writing it around nature. Completely agree with Ben genuinely deserves to be on front page.

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like Rondeaus and I surly like this...a gentle beautiful
    sadness lingers....nice

  • 4 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I so will not lie and say I got this poem I'm a simpleminded person and will take a guess that the bird is the reminder of a moment in time where love was held? If I'm wrong I apologize

    - Mori