Comments : I Don't Want Your Number

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Gosh!!
    Excellent! :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you!! :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Smoothly flowed!

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you!

  • 5 years ago

    by nani

    Good freaking lord!!! I felt like I couldn’t breathe reading that. I was right there the whole time! One heck of a write girl!!! Please keep them coming!!!!!!! My god!!!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Goodness!! I love getting you all riled up ;) hahaha, thank you lovebug!! <3

  • 5 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Dear Cowgirl...omg, I simply love this...it really speaks volumes. Amazing flow, it just hits.

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much beautiful lady!! I really appreciate it! :) <3

  • 5 years ago

    by Lost One

    Damn girl... I'd say I felt like I was in the room but that might be awkward so I'll just say, ''Great imagery!"

    Ok, I'm going back to work now... lol

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Not awkward at all depending on what you're into ;) thanks for reading and commenting!! Now back to work lol

  • 5 years ago

    by ddavidd

    O my God Ren, I should not read this words, for I am practising abstinence for two decades, almost now. A bite of this sinful confection would break any faithful diet.

    • 5 years ago

      by Ren

      Thanks for reading and commenting!

  • 4 years ago

    by WTF

    you sound like my ex lol but you are indeed a wonderful writer.

    • 4 years ago

      by Ren

      Oh my lol well thank you so much!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Kat

    I absolutely LOVE this piece!

    The imagery in every single sentence, the slow of all of the words... All of it is so beautifully written!

    Magnificent poem!!

    • 3 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you love!! I appreciate this wonderful comment! Glad you liked it! Thanks again :)