Comments : Act

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I suppose we can all learn for this. What a powerful ending...
    I couldnt sum it up any better.


  • 9 months ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Great message. We are all guilty of taking time for granted, reveling in the past, hoping for better days yet wasting present time.

    Beautiful poem that truly makes the reader think... I know it put me in check and made me think a little harder about how I've been spending my days.

    • 9 months ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Thank you very much for checking this out Hannah, and I'm honored it got your gears ticking. Sounds like the perfect time to write a poem of your own! :)