Comments : what are the odds? (syntuit)

  • 7 years ago

    by yogi73

    this short prose summons notions of a wild ride...consequences be damned! Sounds like love on rampage

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi there, yogi73.

    I like these short forms. Trying to squeeze as much into 17 syllables concentrates the mind, somewhat.
    Gambling is an addiction and although I don't suffer from it, I like many others do have addictions that are relatable.

    Thanks for stopping by.

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    All summed up very well Mr D :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Hi. I'm not if I pulled this one off. In my mind I saw a person pulling an operating lever down to spin a roulette wheel with mini horses on. The idea woke me up around 3am this morning. Damn! :p

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good to come back to such concise and cutting work like this, Michael - but really, I could expect little else. Nominated.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    A work of art

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Well done with this,

    I've tried this format and I simply can't compress what I wish to convey in such a small format.

    You seem to manage it with ease.

    Regards

    Craig

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Craig. They take a little getting used to. If you ever need some advice let me know.