Comments : Mahogany Rain.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I wish I had just one more vote, as this is an exceptional poem, full of imagery and emotion.
    Someone - please nominate this!

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    MA, this is a wonderful piece, and as MR Darcy said one more vote would have had your name on it. The way you have painted your poem, is with a true emotional brush
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na


  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I was about to bring my arms to bear and nominate this (not just for the masses but because it absolutely deserves it) but I can see I was beaten to it. Wonderful work, MA.

    Take care, thank you for your message on my poem, and all the best to you.


  • 5 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Wow. Speechless, just like Ya----Na. Incredible. -Jane

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Lovely win! Congrats

  • 5 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This poem had multiple meanings to me. It's interesting trying to figure out what the writers intentions actually are when writing a poem. I felt like you were feeling the comfort of the storm, yet you were the storm all at the same time. Then I saw a connection between the storm and anxiety - like a metaphor was made here. Then you made me think of hurricanes and how they get their names. Lots of thoughts and interpretations here... kind of allows the mind to wander quite a bit which I love.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the mystery and I like the voice that gave me as a reader
    to see many things and qualities into it. Its written with so much
    held inside which is waiting to be freed...excellent!

    Congrats on the Win :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm speechless with this poem.

    Its breathtaking within each line,
    filled with emotion to be the person
    you want to become, to find your true soul
    and yet society makes you crouch into a corner
    questioning your thoughts, fears and struggles.

    MA, touched me this week!

  • 5 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    I happened to read this piece at a moment when I was feeling something very similar and connected to your poem very well. The feeling you explored in the words you used were very sensitive in a way that I caught them. This piece was a perfect description of what my morning dream made me feel, and I love it for making me feel not like the only one. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Sweeeeeeeeeet. Congrats on the win.

  • 4 years ago

    by yogi73

    This is a fantastic piece with metaphors of the self in nature.