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The first stanza instantly hooked me, and the rest kept me hooked throughout.
This poem I feel can be read in two ways,
Prehaps someone inlove with another?
Or two people departing, either after a friendship or relationship.
Very beautiful write.
A nice flowing piece William, and reflecting on what our daydreaming can bring
by Meena Krish
Well, I can't say much about dreams shared by two people
for it has many ways and colors it can make it to be..
hope that made sense, take care and keep penning
by Zia Mikaela
i love this! the playful words, the rhythm... everything is so amazing!