Comments : Inside a Daydream

  • 3 years ago

    by Blank

    The first stanza instantly hooked me, and the rest kept me hooked throughout.
    This poem I feel can be read in two ways,
    Prehaps someone inlove with another?
    Or two people departing, either after a friendship or relationship.
    Very beautiful write.

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael

    A nice flowing piece William, and reflecting on what our daydreaming can bring

    M :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well, I can't say much about dreams shared by two people
    for it has many ways and colors it can make it to be..
    hope that made sense, take care and keep penning

  • 3 years ago

    by Zia Mikaela

    i love this! the playful words, the rhythm... everything is so amazing!