A very telling write about society in a whole. Nicely rhymed and flows smoothly. Well done-

Agreed with Brenda - a cutting take on modern society with some harsh lessons throughout.

Take care and all the best

An excellent piece. Nicely rhymed and as Brenda said a cutting take on Modern Society. Its a sad state of affairs that such corruption exists and continues to grow. Best wishes Milly x

I strongly agree. Politics nowadays..