Im really into this...

— a heart drowns in the wave of disbelief
only leaves regrets once water recedes.

Loved this line.

This is so touchingly as well tenderly written like picking out
a delicate cloth fallen among the thorns...I can't pick out a favorite
line and its simply well penned...take care

Shane, such bittersweet longing in this. I feel your pain and sadness. Hugs you-

Thank you so much Miss Meena, poemelo, and my dearest Brenda