WOW! This is so good

An excellent tale that took me right back to being a teenager lol. There is something about teenage boys and their cars that makes them seem so much more important than anything else in their world. A well written piece that captivates. Best wishes Milly x

Awww what a sad story! But with a great lesson...it's really the people we have that we need to spend time with...not always on things we want or things we wanna do. This flowed out good, smooth rhythm which made the read very smooth.

Missed this previously,
A great piece of story telling, True that as younger men we can be more obsessed with the material things that what really matters. sometimes we find out the harsh reality too late, as told in this.
cleverly written.