This piece had me captivated from start to finish. Such wonderful metaphors and depth. The visuals are superb. Absolutely loved it. Milly x

Am completely blown away. As Milly said, wonderful metaphors and depth.

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Glad to see this one nominated, such a way with verse and words :), M

You never cease to amaze me

Shane, this is really lovely. Your descriptions are beautifully wended through this whole write. Well done-

Your use of language is brilliant Shane. So, well ... poetic! Lol
Love it! :-) x
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You really are good at using metaphors. I specially like the first stanza.