I can see how fragile your heart is. Another great poem from you. Every line expresses a heart-felt emotion. Well done :)

Ah Shane! So many excellent lines throughout but it was the last verse that I'll remember. Such brilliant analogy to depict fragility. Excellent and nominated :-) x
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Kitty said it all.
Well done.

Excellent metaphors and full of emotion. Glad to see its been nominated. Milly x

Oh my goodness this just hit me with a tonne of bricks and for some reason made me think about my first 'boyfriend' who decided (well his family did) to move to Aus after him promising me we'd marry one day and he broke my heart bear in mind though we were only 8 haha we were just really good friends but he always said one day he'd marry me... Anyways nothing beats the good old days (and I'm only young haha) the description of this is amazing though and your words as ever have fascinated me and left me in a daze so thank you I truly appreciate how touching they are

Shane, dang it man, such a sad longing write. Your visuals are stunning..I could feel your pain and sadness. Well done-