dislike because you used "lol" in your title, a disgrace to poems

Throughout life most people change and metamorphosis. Results of experiences and lessons learnt. It is rare that someone remains unchanged from who they were even ten years ago. Who you are today is built on the foundations of yesterdays and that can be for the better or worse.

Unfortunately when you join a church or any community you can come across people who like to seek out the worst about someone so that they have something to talk about and sneer. Generally I have observed it is usually people who are unhappy with their lot or who feel inadequate deep down in some way or even just because they have nothing else in their lives to keep them occupied other than to gossip or spread discontent. This is a great piece that highlights clearly the biblical message "let he without sin cast the first stone".

Best wishes Milly x

I disagree with the 'lol' comment

poetry is an expressive art, there are no real rules,
Being able to captivate and take the reader on a journey helps
You have done both with this
nice write.