Wow, I'm very impressed with your meter. I'm usually not one to be wowed by it, as I seem to connect more with free verse. But your words, your rhymes.. it stuck with me. I felt like I was reading a poem straight out of a book, very impressive. A high quality, dark poem. Beautifully penned.
Thank you Hannah for your lovely comments. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, its not my usual style but I am so pleased that I got the meter right. (something I struggle with) All my best wishes Milly x
Something always bleed from the heart of a poet. Like sadness bleeds from mine and darkness from yours. This bleeding is necessary to let go of what's bothering our soul. Milly, excellent write once again. Everything's perfect.