Comments : Wonder (Pleiades)

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, what a neat style and really cool write! Well done-

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I have learnt so much from your formed writing, Meena. Very cleverly done.

    All the very best as ever,
    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I really like this form. I imagine it made you think hard to pour your words into this strict mould. Good work. :O)

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Meena,
    a lovely form of writing and worded so well

    Michael :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Such a lovely write

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    The same thing is happening in my life these days. Whenever I think of letting her go, she does something to wrap my mind, my soul in her eyes. And Miss Meena. Lovely write as ever

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Superb. A very strict form but your write is smooth and works really well. You absolutely (as usual) nailed it. Best wishes Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by William Mae

    Sometimes we are missing something in our life, we search for a piece to complete life’s puzzle, and when we find it we may not be able to explain it but we know it. This poem is a beautiful write.