Comments : Lost and Found (sonnet)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent stuff, Kitty. All I would say is that 'fretting about' missteps a little. 'ing' and 'a' are both unstressed and in a row. If you wrote 'fretting over', the 'ing' would be unstressed and the 'o' would be stressed getting the iambic meter back on track there.
    I hope at least some of that made sense...

    Take care and well done on this.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Totally makes sense Ben and I've changed it. Thanks so much for your encouragement and help as always :-) x
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  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty this a fab attempt at a lovely sonnet. I have to agree with Ben, just that little tweak is where I read in that line, however I think you have done a great job lady, and your story is to boot! all out of nominations, otherwise...
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Michael, I really appreciate that :-) x
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  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I love this.. Just wish I had a nomination left. Its wonderful to know that true love will never truly pass you by. Milly x

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Milly, lovely comments :-) x
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  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is amazeballs ! X

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Loves true light is the one that has always glowed it's promise. X

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations - it's always nice to see a sonnet on the front page. X

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      And two sonnets no less! Thanks Mr D :-) x
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  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Hey Miss Kitty congratulations on front page splash :)x

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Michael, I'm thrilled! :-) x
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  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Great win!

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thank you Mark and thank you so much for nominating it. I really appreciate it xx
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  • 7 years ago

    by Muhammad Amiruddeen

    Love lost and found is not love lost at all. I love this piece. Elegant in it simplicity.