Comments : on your bike (syntuit)

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    except my face would look awful from the many times of falling lol

    I do ok when I ride my mountain bike.. two wheels= two feet... but balancing more than you can handle in life is too much for one foot.. = one wheel...

    you get my madness by my comment but I got a great meaning out of this little gem! awesome!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is great Michael and does indeed sound fun. The alliteration in that first line is just so darn...wobbly!
    *By the way, 'wobbling' has two syllables I think, making that line four in total.

    Take care, good man

    • 5 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Wobbling like life, Ben.
      Thanks, as ever.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A clever and - dare I say it - altogether sneaky amendment :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Jamie

    Another poem I really enjoyed from you because of the funny truth to it. When we really think of the bare basics of it, we really do wobble through life, I think you could really say life is a balancing act which I truly think this about. You have to know when to be serious but you also have to know when to have fun and let that inner child out which is what I see in this poem. You directed the reader to the fun side of life. And I really liked unicycle because when I personally think of unicycles I think of clowns and although some people are afraid of clowns a lot of kids see them as fun, so I liked that hidden meaning behind this. Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this quirky syntuit. I think wibble and wobbling are such deliciously funny words. Particularly wibble. Especially if you add a Rowen Atkinson voice over. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      You are so right. I love Captain slack bladder! Lol

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Very funny especially as I've just been wibbling and wobbling on mine of my way home from work because people wouldn't get outta my way hahaha

  • 1 year ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Still like this one