So you won the the right to be born, I congratulate you so did I .May your journey bring you every opportunity it has to offer Happy Arrival Date To You. may Love find you doing well. Happy Arrival Date To You.
Sylvia this piece for me is thought provoking because at first glance it looks as if the character is celebrating the birth of another but woven between the lines is an underlying anamosity as if this birth has impacted the characters life possibly an only child coming to terms with parents making everything about the baby.
A strong piece for your first submission. Take care and welcome to the site. Best wishes Milly x