Comments : A Short Tale (Naked Encounter)

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    The humor involved is quite refreshing. I didn't know what to expect by the title or even the beginning. You helped this poor man but was skeptical and afraid due to the situation, as it was rather odd. He wanted to thank you with a small bouquet of picked wildflowers, he ran to catch up to you.. only to frighten you and in return, he got maced. Just an overall bad day for this man lol.

    Good write

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      What a lovely surprise to see so many lovely comments. I almost didnt publish it because I wasnt sure how the humour would fare. Really please to find it made people smile. All my best wishes and thanks for all the lovely comments. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh my goodness Milly! Love this! What a wonderful tale you told. Well done-

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Your humorous poems never fail to hit the mark, Milly.

    Take care

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Haha miss Milly,
    what a lovely and humorous piece from you, with a lovely flowing rhyme scheme

    Much love
    M:)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This really made me chuckle Milly! A lovely, funny tale. Glad it's nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 5 years ago

    by Jamie

    I really enjoyed the humor crafted here from you milly. I think anyone would have the same reaction to the one the character expresses here, in shock and surprise. I am glad to see this is nominated as well.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This made me chuckle in the works canteen to say I got a few funny looks is an understatement but who cares layhter makes the world goes round .... Loved this glad it's nominated :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Em, I can just imagine you reading it in the canteen lol. Really glad it made you laugh. Humour is so difficult to get right because everyone's sense of humour is very different. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my haha...a fun piece Milly and I had a good laugh...I would also nominate this without a doubt. Your humor is spot on.