Excellently done, Scott. Nominated.

Scott, it is so wonderful to be able to take that control back. You are the master of your destiny. You have done an amazing job with this. It is truly a testament to your inner strength. Good job!

Hi Scott ... I really liked this and how it seemed to flow pretty well though there are a couple of 'errors' I picked up:
the last line in stanza 4 the 'want' should be 'won't' I feel,
the last line in stanza 9 I feel puts off the flow a little to the piece, I'm not sure why but I thought you could use something like "but this time I won't think of my demise" and
the 2nd line in stanza 10 I feel would read better like this "with idle times he's disappeared" I say this because you use 2 different tenses in the line you wrote and it's a little off putting though these are only suggestions, use them if you wish.
I do however (as I said earlier) think this piece is fabulous especially as you're feeling in a much happier place, I hope it stays that way, glad to see this nominated.
Take care,
Em xx

Anothee excellent piece. Taking control when life is tough takes courage and strength but is always worth it. Milly x