Comments : Paradise Found

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An interesting piece that shows that at the end of the day the riches and the beauty and temptations of the world are not as important as the small things. Loved the surprise ending of Cheese and French Fries :) Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Muhammad Amiruddeen

      Well if you follow carefull is there all along, it's a journey to get cheese and French Fries but there's also pun on cheese which also means someone special hence the need to put it in capital as a personal noun that it is. Thank you for your kind review @ Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Koan

    This is a very beautiful and yet funny poem!
    Enjoyed the read