This is a beautiful and dark- emotion filled rhyme poem... I am in pure speechlessness... very powerful!

Wow! A lot to absorb in these words-well done-

Congrats on the win

judges comment
I loved everything about this piece, from the clever rhyming, the single word choice to begin the piece that almost gives us a run up into the deep analogies of the final four stanzas. When reading this you find yourself chanting along with it. The pace quickening despite the increased word count. A clever poem well written 7 points.