Comments : Whispers In The Fall

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mark, glad you found it so

  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    So glad this is nominated!

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em, glad you enjoyed it

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Nice word choice...

    My favourite lines----

    Now moonlight drips upon a starless sky
    and there's no cover, nor warmth in sight.
    The wind plays rough in light of fragile bones
    which crack in tune with shards of broken hope.

    Spot on..

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Gel, that was the heaviest part for me to write, too. Glad you like it