Comments : Whispers In The Fall

  • 11 months ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful

    • 11 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Mark, glad you found it so

  • 11 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    So glad this is nominated!

    • 11 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em, glad you enjoyed it

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Nice word choice...

    My favourite lines----

    Now moonlight drips upon a starless sky
    and there's no cover, nor warmth in sight.
    The wind plays rough in light of fragile bones
    which crack in tune with shards of broken hope.

    Spot on..

    Gel

    • 11 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Gel, that was the heaviest part for me to write, too. Glad you like it