Comments : Under a Flower (Double Haiku)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful double haiku this is. I truly do look forward to reading more of your work.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by S.T.A.R.

      Thank you so much, it has been a while since I wrote one.!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful piece. I absolutely love that last stanza... the concept of collecting spring in a basket creates such lovely imagery. Milly x

  • 6 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Just Beautiful <3

  • 6 months ago

    by S.T.A.R.

    Thank you ladies :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    A lovely haiku, makes me yearn for spring and flowers blooming. Well done-

  • 6 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Wow, so gutted I missed this one.

    • 6 months ago

      by S.T.A.R.

      Thank you so much :)

  • 5 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi.
    There's a mystical quality to this haiku chain. To me I see a fairy hovering above multi-coloured fallen petals. In her basket, all that is Spring.
    Lovely work.

    • 5 months ago

      by S.T.A.R.

      Thank you Me.Darcy :)