Comments : When things shine

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wonderfully written Glad to see it nominated.

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    This is truly beautiful.

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful piece. The song of tears, what a lovely concept. Milly x

  • 5 months ago

    by Daniel

    Some really pretty imagery here! I think it suffers in the second and third stanzas with the use of ‘whatever’ and ‘close my eyes tightly as hands’ sounds a little awkward. I can’t imagine it.

    The final stanza is lovely, and demonstrates some nice verb use. :)